The Elements Exploration: Interconnected Stories of Trauma

Young Freya spends time with her distracted mother in Cornwall when she meets teenage twins. "The only thing better than being aware of a secret," they tell her, "is having one of your own." In the weeks that ensue, they violate her, then inter her while living, blend of nervousness and irritation flitting across their faces as they finally release her from her makeshift coffin.

This might have stood as the shocking centrepiece of a novel, but it's just one of many terrible events in The Elements, which assembles four novelettes – published distinctly between 2023 and 2025 – in which characters confront previous suffering and try to achieve peace in the present moment.

Disputed Context and Subject Exploration

The book's release has been clouded by the addition of Earth, the subsequent novella, on the candidate list for a significant LGBTQ+ writing prize. In August, most other nominees withdrew in protest at the author's debated views – and this year's prize has now been terminated.

Discussion of trans rights is not present from The Elements, although the author explores plenty of major issues. Anti-gay prejudice, the effect of traditional and social media, parental neglect and abuse are all investigated.

Distinct Narratives of Trauma

  • In Water, a sorrowful woman named Willow transfers to a secluded Irish island after her husband is imprisoned for awful crimes.
  • In Earth, Evan is a footballer on trial as an accomplice to rape.
  • In Fire, the adult Freya balances revenge with her work as a doctor.
  • In Air, a father travels to a funeral with his young son, and considers how much to disclose about his family's history.
Pain is layered with pain as wounded survivors seem fated to meet each other repeatedly for forever

Interconnected Accounts

Links multiply. We first meet Evan as a boy trying to escape the island of Water. His trial's panel contains the Freya who shows up again in Fire. Aaron, the father from Air, collaborates with Freya and has a child with Willow's daughter. Supporting characters from one account reappear in homes, bars or legal settings in another.

These plot threads may sound complicated, but the author is skilled at how to power a narrative – his prior successful Holocaust drama has sold numerous units, and he has been converted into many languages. His direct prose bristles with suspenseful hooks: "after all, a doctor in the burns unit should know better than to toy with fire"; "the first thing I do when I come to the island is modify my name".

Character Development and Narrative Power

Characters are portrayed in brief, impactful lines: the compassionate Nigerian priest, the disturbed pub landlord, the daughter at struggle with her mother. Some scenes resonate with tragic power or insightful humour: a boy is struck by his father after wetting himself at a football match; a prejudiced island mother and her Dublin-raised neighbour trade insults over cups of weak tea.

The author's talent of carrying you completely into each narrative gives the comeback of a character or plot strand from an previous story a authentic frisson, for the initial several times at least. Yet the cumulative effect of it all is desensitizing, and at times almost comic: suffering is piled on suffering, accident on chance in a dark farce in which damaged survivors seem doomed to meet each other repeatedly for eternity.

Thematic Depth and Final Assessment

If this sounds different from life and resembling limbo, that is part of the author's thesis. These damaged people are burdened by the crimes they have endured, stuck in cycles of thought and behavior that churn and descend and may in turn damage others. The author has talked about the effect of his personal experiences of abuse and he depicts with sympathy the way his characters navigate this dangerous landscape, extending for remedies – solitude, frigid water immersion, reconciliation or bracing honesty – that might let light in.

The book's "fundamental" concept isn't particularly instructive, while the quick pace means the discussion of social issues or online networks is mostly superficial. But while The Elements is a imperfect work, it's also a entirely readable, victim-focused epic: a welcome response to the typical obsession on detectives and offenders. The author shows how suffering can affect lives and generations, and how duration and compassion can soften its reverberations.

Kristen Francis
Kristen Francis

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